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Haiku by Kikaku

A dragonfly

remove it swings...

a red pepper!





Kikaku

Kikaku was one of Matsuo Basho's pupil. When Kikaku wrote this haiku:

A dragonfly

remove it swings...

a red pepper!

His master Basho thought the haiku was to cruel and replied with this version:

a red pepper,

add some wings,

a dragonfly.

 

A dragonfly / remove its wings / a red pepper (Kikaku).i

First published in Frogpond, Haiku Society of America, 34:1, Winter 2011

 

 

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